I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, April 21, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi AJ, it is great to see that you have posted your learning. Maybe you could tell us what your post is about. and how to write an acrostic poem.
ReplyDeleteMiss McClelland
Hi AJ, I like your acrostic poem. Did you do this in writing? Maybe you could tell us some more information. Can you tell me why you chose to write 'devil' for letter d?
ReplyDeleteMiss McLeod
Kia ora AJ, thanks for sharing your learning with us. I like that you have chosen words like friendly, nice and responsible for your acrostic poem. I am confused about the word 'devil' though, did you find it tricky to come up with a word that started with D? Hmm... maybe a good friend could be described as 'dedicated' meaning they are loyal and stick by you. Keep up the hard work AJ!
ReplyDeleteMiss Williamson
Morena AJ, thank you for sharing your work. Friends are interesting. I look forward to seeing more of your blogs.
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